Editing Quote #25790

Prepared for Renan Bernardo
Title of Work: Anticipation of Hollowness
Wordcount: 7400

Your editor is Wes Matlock
Contact: [email protected]
Edit Level: Medium Edit - light editing plus style, grammar, and word usage

Message From the Editor

Dear editors,

I’d like to quote for a short story. My main concern is that I’m not an English native. Though I write safely in English, there are word choices and phrases that might be jarring for a native speaker.

Thank you.

Best regards,
Renan Bernardo

Hi Renan,

Thank you so much for submitting your story, “Anticipation of Hollowness,” to Mythcreants for editing. I have read through your comments and the sample you have sent to us.

Before my life as an editor, I actually spent seven years teaching English, and so many of your concerns are things that I am familiar fixing. You do have a strong command of English, and I particularly enjoyed this line: “I drowned in clinking cutlery, the croon of educated voices, and a soft violin melody weaving through the air.” Just great use of alliteration and imagery in there. Really evocative.

As for my style guide and references, I prefer to use the Chicago Manual of Style and Merriam-Webster’s Dictionary, if that is agreeable with you.

I look forward to working with you,



If you order my services by March 15, you will receive the completed work one week after your order.


This price is not an estimate; it is a guarantee. The editing price is good for three months starting on March 7, 2019.

Editing Price: $315
Expedite Fee: $0
Feedback Addon: $0
Total Price: $315

Important Information

This quote is for a single pass of editing. You will receive a marked-up copy of your manuscript with edits and comments. Additional revisions are subject to additional fees.

No guarantees are made as to the salability or marketability of the edited manuscript. Nor is there a guarantee that the manuscript will be completely error-free, though all efforts will be made to make it so.

Questions or comments? You may contact your editor or [email protected]

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