Villainy is a profession loaded with tropes. From the evil speech to the climactic duel against the hero, villainous behavior has been tweaked and refined through the ages. Unfortunately, some of these tropes make the villain look incompetent. They invoke eye-rolling from the audience and destroy tension in the name of plot convenience.
A simple answer is not to use these tropes, and that’s certainly acceptable. But like most bad tropes, these can work if they are handled carefully. Let’s take a look at five of the most common.
1. Leaving the Hero Alive
Why would the villain bother killing the hero? Obviously this weakling do-gooder is no threat to them. Or maybe death is too good for the hero, and they must be left alive until their spirits are properly crushed. Either way, the villain has it in their power to kill the hero and chooses not to.
Audiences can see through this trope from a mile away. It’s obvious that the hero will eventually go on to conquer the villain, and passing up a chance to eliminate the threat just makes the villain seem deliberately negligent.
Nowhere is this better shown than in Angel. The titular Angel is obviously a huge threat to the evil law firm, Wolfram and Hart. He thwarts their plans at least every other episode, kills their important clients, and is otherwise a huge thorn in their side.
Theoretically, a company with Wolfram and Hart’s resources should be able to kill Angel. They know where he stays during the day, and they have plenty of demons on retainer who could do the job. Sometimes Angel even puts himself directly into their power. And yet the law firm does nothing. This makes the show’s main villains feel impotent and robs the conflict of any tension because, no matter what Angel does, he never faces any retribution.
How to Make It Work
Many stories wouldn’t get very far if the villain killed the hero at the first opportunity, so this trope is not without value. The key is to make it seem like the villain doesn’t need to kill the hero. If done properly, this can actually increase the villain’s threat level. It also helps if the villain has a strong reason for wanting the hero alive, but that’s not enough on its own. Wolfram and Hart claimed they needed Angel alive in order to bring about the apocalypse, but he was such a threat to them that the explanation didn’t hold up.
A much better example comes from the first season of Teen Wolf. The villain of that season, a mysterious Alpha werewolf, has several chances to kill protagonist Scott but passes them up. The Alpha wants Scott to join his pack, and in order for that to happen, Scott must be alive. This works because whenever the two clash, Scott is handily defeated. Since Scott doesn’t seem like a threat, the Alpha’s reasoning for keeping him alive is easy to accept. There’s also a time limit on the Alpha’s patience, and it’s made clear he will kill Scott if another full moon goes by without Scott joining the pack.
Make sure to foreshadow how the protagonist can eventually triumph against such a powerful foe. Otherwise, the audience may just give up on the story because the good guys seem doomed to fail, or the hero’s victory won’t feel legitimate. Teen Wolf does this by showing that the key to defeating the Alpha is for the other characters to work together, something the Alpha doesn’t predict.
2. Obsessing Over the Hero
Villains are busy people with important plans, but all too often they find time to become obsessed with the hero. This might manifest with the villain needing to best the hero in single combat or recruit the hero to their side, even when the villain has better things to do. Bonus points if this need actually hinders the villain’s plan. Alternatively, the villain might just constantly talk about how awesome or dangerous the hero is, far out of proportion with anything the protagonist has actually done.
An obsessed villain is often symptomatic of an over-candied protagonist, and it makes the villain hard to take seriously. They seem more like a devoted fan than an antagonist. The novel The One-Eyed Man illustrates the problem beautifully. The story really wants protagonist Paulo to be an every-man, but also an amazing badass.
The novel focuses mostly on Paulo doing an uneventful environmental survey and drinking beer. But that’s not very exciting, and it certainly doesn’t make Paulo seem cool. For that, we must rely on a number of antagonists who will not stop talking about him and how worried they are about the outcome of his survey. It’s not clear what they’re worried he’ll uncover, but the novel keeps cutting away from Paulo’s first-person POV so the villains can talk about how good he is at investigating and how they need to stop him. At one point, they risk exposure and arrest by trying to kill him, even though it’s still not clear what they’re worried he’ll find.
How to Make It Work
If the villain is obsessed with the hero, that motivation should be baked into the villain’s character, and it should be a personal obsession. Instead of a villain who meets the hero and is enamored at first sight, the villain should have a deep-seated motivation. Perhaps the villain blames the hero for a loved one’s death or for a humiliating defeat. Whether or not the hero actually has any responsibility is less important than that the villain believes it.
This obsession should be directly related to the villain’s goals, not a distraction from them. In Star Trek: Deep Space Nine, Gul Dukat is obsessed with Major Kira from the first episode. At first, he pretends he’s just into her, but it quickly becomes clear that Kira is a symbol to him of the entire Bajoran people. Dukat has never gotten over the way the Bajorans hate him for overseeing the occupation of their world, despite how much he believes he did for them. Getting the Bajorans to love him is a motivation for many of Dukat’s actions, and Kira is a personification of her people.
3. Explaining the Master Plan
Before I kill you, Mr. Bond… Actually, how about I just kill you? We all know how silly it is for a villain to explain their plan to the hero. It appears on every list of “things an evil overlord should never do,” and with good reason.
Yet this trope remains popular because it allows storytellers to keep their villain’s plan a secret until the last possible moment, and it’s easier for a secret plan to be threatening. When the villain’s plan is vague and shadowy, the audience can fill in the blanks with whatever most scares them. But once the plan is known, it can lose a lot of its threat.
So storytellers still wait until the dramatic conclusion to reveal the villain’s plan. But since most of them know how silly this trope is, they try to cover it with snappy dialogue and lampshading. That doesn’t actually solve the problem. At best it obfuscates that the villain is giving away valuable information when they don’t have any reason to.
Doctor Who does this so often that getting the villains to talk is one of the Doctor’s unofficial superpowers. The Daleks in particular love to monologue at him, even though they’re supposed to be cold, logical extermination machines. Usually, the Doctor makes some quip about how Daleks do like to go on, but he’s* not fooling anyone.
How to Make It Work
If you want the villain to explain their plan, they need to feel completely safe. And no, the moment before their final triumph, with the hero at their mercy, does not count as safe. Any competent villain will know the hero is dangerous so long as they remain alive.*
When the villain explains their plan, it must be to someone they don’t think is a threat. This might be a trusted friend who’s secretly on team good, or a hero who’s been built up to be really good at getting information out of people. To reference Deep Space Nine again, one episode has the secondary villain Damar divulge his plans to Quark. This scene works because most characters think Quark is a harmless bartender, and we’ve seen before that he’s very good at getting people to talk. Damar is also very drunk.
Revealing the villain’s plan like this is a great way to both up the stakes and give the heroes a fighting chance. The audience learns just how bad things might get, but the good guys at least have an opportunity to stop it, no matter how slim.
4. Appear Overtly Villainous
The adage goes that everyone is the hero of their own story, even the villain. No one gets up in the morning and decides to look evil. This is why it’s comical when a bad guy shows up looking like he just came from a meeting of the Evil League of Evil. It stands out, especially in TV shows like Babylon Five, when bad dudes routinely try to infiltrate the station dressed all in black and scowling like they want to murder someone. They are so obvious to the audience that it’s hard to imagine no one in security noticed them.
Sometimes it’s not about how a villain looks but how they sound. If a villain makes an obviously evil offer to the protagonist, it’ll be impossible to take seriously. In Star Trek: First Contact, the Borg Queen tries to recruit Data and says that he should join her to assimilate humanity and his friends. In return, she’ll give him some human skin. If that sounds ridiculous, it is. Of course, Data doesn’t take the offer, but the Queen is gullible enough to believe him when he says he will.
It’s reasonable to want a villain to stand out, and dialing up the evilness is certainly one way to do that. But in most situations, it will behoove the villain not to look or sound completely unhinged. If they appear that way regardless, it will make them seem incompetent to the audience.
How to Make It Work
A villain will be at their most villainous when they are addressing those who believe the same things they do. If you’ve ever been shocked by a politician’s bigoted speech, that speech was not for you. It was directed at the politician’s supporters, who believe every word. Similarly, a villain is more likely to wear their evil attire while in a place of their own power. In Return of the Jedi, Palpatine dresses like an evil emperor because he has no need to downplay his evilness for Luke. He’s in control of the situation and gains nothing by subterfuge.
If you want to communicate how evil a character is to the audience but not the other characters, put the villain in a position where they have to switch roles. Cultists infiltrating the good guy’s base will try to seem reasonable and balanced to anyone they meet in person. It’s only when they get a secure call from the cult’s leader that they start muttering ominously about the rising darkness.
5. Killing Their Own Lieutenants
A villain’s lieutenant fails in an important assignment. To show their displeasure, the villain kills the lieutenant. This villain doesn’t tolerate failure, you see. Which is ironic, because with that kind of policy they’re almost certain to fail in the long run.
A villain who kills their own lieutenants is incompetent for a number of reasons. First, everyone fails sometimes. If the villain kills everyone who messes up, soon they won’t have any minions left. Second, this kind of arbitrary murder is almost certain to weaken the loyalty of the minions who remain. Why would they want to work for someone who might kill them at any time? Finally, and most damningly, killing a lieutenant makes the hero’s job easier. Now they have one less enemy to fight. This reduces the story’s tension, which is the opposite of a villain’s job.
Nowhere is this better illustrated than season three of Teen Wolf. In one episode, the big bad Deucalion kills one of his own heavies for tying in a fight against one of the heroes. Not losing, tying. As if that weren’t absurd enough, Deucalion then needs to lie to the rest of his pack about it. No way that info will ever come back to bite him. But most damningly, Deucalion’s pack of werewolves only numbered four to begin with. By killing his lieutenant, Deucalion has reduced his force by 25%. Presumably, the heroes will send him a thank you card.
How to Make It Work
One option is to show that the villain has lots and lots of minions clamoring for the lieutenant’s job. When the lieutenant dies, the villain will simply promote someone else. This is how Darth Vader handles his officers in Empire Strikes Back. It’s not a good management strategy, but in the short term it can ensure the promotion of more capable lieutenants. For this strategy to work, the lieutenants must be valuable for their leadership or administrative qualities, not their superhuman strength. Captain Piet can take over Admiral Ozzle’s command, but a powerful werewolf isn’t so easily replaced.
Even if the villain has plenty of qualified applicants lining up for the lieutenant’s job, it should be clear that the lieutenant actually made poor choices. If it looks like they only failed because of uncontrollable circumstances, the villain will still look incompetent for killing them.
A second option is to use the killing of a lieutenant to show that the villain is unraveling. This should happen near the end of the story, with the villain upping their level of evilness until their lieutenant won’t go along with it any longer. This works particularly well with sympathetic villains. The lieutenant’s refusal to go along with the plan is a redemption door. When the villain kills their lieutenant, they slam the door shut.
A villain’s competence is vital to the story because the villain provides opposition. If the opposition isn’t strong, the hero will waltz through too easily, and the story is boring. When in doubt, it’s best to avoid tropes that risk the villain’s competence. But for storytellers who are prepared to dive deep into the nuts and bolts, many bad tropes can be turned into an advantage.
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